it was
the poor
tangled vines
twisting
sunward
coveting
your light
through
the canopy
that choked
the life
from their
climbing vessel
became
the hollow
trunk
transmuted
tower
of emptiness.
searching for simplicity
it was
the poor
tangled vines
twisting
sunward
coveting
your light
through
the canopy
that choked
the life
from their
climbing vessel
became
the hollow
trunk
transmuted
tower
of emptiness.
maysa-maria peterson
“If you can see your path laid out in front of you step by step, you know it’s not your path. Your own path you make with every step you take. That’s why it’s your path.” ― Joseph Campbell
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